Hero- Mason Reber

[Mason Reber]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][atrb=valign, top][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=style, border: 10px solid #f1e3b4; width: 450px; background-color: #f6f7f1;][STYLE=font-family: courier new; font-size: 36px; color: #191919; text-align: center; letter-spacing: 2px;]PERMANENT FILE[/style][STYLE=float: right; margin: 10px 10px 0px 0px; padding: 2px; border: 1px solid #000000;][/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 10px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px;]NAME: Mason Reber AGE: 23 GENDER: Male SEXUALITY: Hetero RACE: NEXT GROUP: Hero OCCUPATION: Hero CATCH PHRASE:: "My metal shimmers, but you've just lost your shine!" HEIGHT: 6'2" WEIGHT: 185 PICTURE: i1193.photobucket.com/albums/aa350/daniel80000/Anime20Guy-1.png FACE CLAIM: (Its drawn, so idk lol) PERSONALITY TRAITS:[/style][STYLE= margin: 0px 10px 0px 10px; border: 2px solid #191919; padding: 2px; font-family: verdana; height: 125px; overflow: auto; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; background-color: #ffffff; opacity: 0.8] positive points. ■ Chivalrous ■ Focuses on civilians ■ Will fight for the "little guy" ■ Will sacrifice own point opportunities to same other Heros ■ Tries to do anything to help civilians negative points. ■ Cold/Distant ■ Heavy Drinker ■ Doesn't mind damaging property ■ Doesn't mind injuring criminals (but won't kill) ■ Forgets what happens when drunk [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 10px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px;]ABOUT PAST EVENTS[/style][STYLE= margin: 0px 10px 0px 10px; border: 2px solid #191919; padding: 2px; font-family: verdana; height: 125px; overflow: auto; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; background-color: #ffffff; opacity: 0.8] Mason grew up in a dark place. The town was overridden with crime and police sirens sounded constantly. Lucky for him, he had two loving parents that cared for him but couldn't afford to move to a safer neighborhood. He was never allowed to leave the house and his parents home schooled him. Things were ok, but they were about to get worse. One night when he was Nine, someone tried to break into their house. Mason's father tried to fight back and drive him away, but the burglar was armed, and shot him square in the face with a shotgun. Mason and his mother where hiding in the closet, but when she heard the gunshot, his mother told Mason to wait in the closet until she got back. After another gunshot, Mason quickly ran out, only to find his parents dead. Engulfed in horror, sadness, and rage, he screamed out. Now the burglar had to kill the boy too, but right when he shot the gun and Mason through his hands up to block, the shotgun pellets stopped in mid air. Mason was glowing, and when he put is hand out to touch on of the floating pellets, they all sot forward and killed the burglar. Mason was confused on what happened, but then he realized it. He had powers like the Hero's on TV, he was a NEXT. After that, he enrolled in the Hero Academy and became a hero himself. With the power to control metal, no gun would ever hurt anyone again! He still though, carries a deep sadness in him from that day long ago. To suppress this depression, he turned to the drink. Almost everyday, you can see him at the bar, drinking away his feelings. [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 10px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px;]INFORMATION [/style][STYLE= margin: 0px 10px 0px 10px; border: 2px solid #191919; padding: 2px; font-family: verdana; height: 125px; overflow: auto; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; background-color: #ffffff; opacity: 0.8] hero name. ■ Metal Meister company and sponsors. ■ GMC, Microsoft suit. ■ i1193.photobucket.com/albums/aa350/daniel80000/Anime20Guy-1.png No special powers, but can use the metal on it for power use. other. ■ Can make a large Metal Disk that he can stand on and control its movement for transportation use. brief description. ■ Metal Manipulation; Can take any surrounding metal substance that he touches and change/manipulate its form and trajectory lists of known moves. ■ Finger Bullets; Touches his fingertips to a metal surface, and when he pulls them away, it pulls the metal with them and forms small spheres. He then aims his open hand at the criminal and propels the metal spheres towards him/her ■ Metal Burst; Makes a "bomb" out of metal, and instead of it making a blast, it bursts in a rain of sharp shrapnel ■ Metal Mold; Pulls metal off of an object and molds it into a blunt weapon or a shield. weaknesses. ■ Cannot use powers without metal [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 10px; margin-top: 10px; margin-left: 10px;]LIKES & DISLIKES[/style][STYLE= margin: 0px 10px 0px 10px; border: 2px solid #191919; padding: 2px; font-family: verdana; height: 125px; overflow: auto; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; background-color: #ffffff; opacity: 0.8] likes. ■ Hard Liquor ■ Piano Playing ■ Helping People ■ Scrap Sculpting dislikes. ■ Opening up/getting close to people ■ Criminals ■ Meat ■ Cruelty [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 12px; margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; text-align: center; font-family: courier new]application was passed by username[/style]

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created by ZETTA of BTN

[DARKWINGS]

• Please change that picture to a 100x100 icon of your fc.
  
  
• I just so happen to know where the picture is from. It's the class Assassin Cross from Ragnarok Online.
  
  
• Change your picture url to an actual link. (basically do this... Picture)
  
  
• There's a string of code at the bottom so you can change the tab on the side to your character's name.
  
  
• " Focuses on civilians" and "Tries to do anything to help civilians" are basically the same thing.
  
  
• You need to pick a company that you represent. You can find the companies in the Info board.
  
  
• Change your suit url to a link as before.
  
  
• No amount of metal thrown together will give you a hover board. Metal manipulation does not mean you get both gravity/magnetism and metal at the same time.
  
  
• Problem in your history. It reads more like you want him to have telepathy as opposed to metal manipulation. Touch is the key to manipulation.
  
  
• I must point this out as I seem to have overlooked it. One who is chivalrous and sacrificial isn't cold. They're caring and loving. Hence why they sacrifice.
  
  
• Your history is just... very Gary-Stu. Very Generic. Histories are meant to tell the reader why your character are how they are.I come away from your history feeling like I know nothing about your character other than his mother and father were shot and he doesn't like guns. (which strangely wasn't in dislikes...)